Selasa, 29 April 2014



Name  :Mahdalena
SRN     :12340044
Writing Assingment Meeting 5

















If  I could go back in time
(I Wish father back to Us)

To day I would like to make write paragraph narrative about my story in the past, or go back in time many stories in the past, one of them  the most important moment  is the time when I was child, one day while I was sound asleep with mother and brother  at home, it's time our family situation is very sad because my father wanted to wander away with the aim to make a living for our family so that the economy is better than ever I was very sad to see a father waved his hand and say goodbye to our.
However I realized that the father has gone and there is no in  home anymore but I'm sure one day my father definitely back with us.  Because we are family I'm sure my father came back to  home, 6 months pass unnoticed without our father's life was very uneasy because as long as the father does not give news letter was not my father got from a lot of problems that we face today is not my father 's mother who replaces the position of father to provide for us I'm very sad with this situation, in every morning our mother always prepare for  breakfat and than  mother to go to work in the vilage until the dawn sinking  mother returned home,  mother did it all just for the happiness of his children, for the sake of all our needs are met and friends can attend school like other friends . Mother always said that education is very important for the future and the way however the brave mother worked hard for his children to keep the school, my mother though is very hard worker and the results of how even the sodium absorption ratio was not sufficient to  the daily needs . finally there came a letter from my father in a letter dad saying that  father longing for his wife and children, father here is very good , and had a good job don’t thinking father's health because my body is now getting fatter . I 'd love to invite my family on holiday to miss it feels ancol want to see that smile again on family faces . Dad would come home a month later keep yourself  and I do  love u. emotion and happy to be one when I read the letter from the father , and we waiting  until the day comes happiness. One month later the father came back to our home then we fell very happy , but when the father was already at the door of our upfront collapsed an instant smile when he saw  dad  holding the woman's hand who was standing next to  father and infant carrying her son.  “Dad went on to explain that as long as he worked there had already remarried”. 
Indeed shocking news like thunder during the day , it is a state that we can not accept and never thought that our father loved the heart share the love with others . My mother was very disappointed with my father  so, mother decided to split up , even though the father does not agree then we moved and took the mother to stay at grandmother’s home , until now we have never again met with  father and respective live. If I could go back in time maybe I would never allow my father to go wander far. And maybe this time the father was beside us.
Family is very important as it shapes our development and personality. The family protects your dignity and takes care of your well being. Family also gives us teachings that guide us through out our lives and this are the values we carry every where we go. In addition, your family comes to your aid during hard times.
Note:
ð Paragraph 1 is Orentation
ð Paragraph 2 is Complication
ð Paragraph 3 is Resolution
ð Paragraph 4 is coda / Moral message


Name  :Mahdalena
SRN     :12340044





Writing Assingment Meeting 5













If  I could go back in time
(I Wish father back to Us)

To day I would like to make write paragraph narrative about my story in the past, or go back in time many stories in the past, one of them  the most important moment  is the time when I was child, one day while I was sound asleep with mother and brother  at home, it's time our family situation is very sad because my father wanted to wander away with the aim to make a living for our family so that the economy is better than ever I was very sad to see a father waved his hand and say goodbye to our.
However I realized that the father has gone and there is no in  home anymore but I'm sure one day my father definitely back with us.  Because we are family I'm sure my father came back to  home, 6 months pass unnoticed without our father's life was very uneasy because as long as the father does not give news letter was not my father got from a lot of problems that we face today is not my father 's mother who replaces the position of father to provide for us I'm very sad with this situation, in every morning our mother always prepare for  breakfat and than  mother to go to work in the vilage until the dawn sinking  mother returned home,  mother did it all just for the happiness of his children, for the sake of all our needs are met and friends can attend school like other friends . Mother always said that education is very important for the future and the way however the brave mother worked hard for his children to keep the school, my mother though is very hard worker and the results of how even the sodium absorption ratio was not sufficient to  the daily needs . finally there came a letter from my father in a letter dad saying that  father longing for his wife and children, father here is very good , and had a good job don’t thinking father's health because my body is now getting fatter . I 'd love to invite my family on holiday to miss it feels ancol want to see that smile again on family faces . Dad would come home a month later keep yourself  and I do  love u. emotion and happy to be one when I read the letter from the father , and we waiting  until the day comes happiness. One month later the father came back to our home then we fell very happy , but when the father was already at the door of our upfront collapsed an instant smile when he saw  dad  holding the woman's hand who was standing next to  father and infant carrying her son.  “Dad went on to explain that as long as he worked there had already remarried”. 
Indeed shocking news like thunder during the day , it is a state that we can not accept and never thought that our father loved the heart share the love with others . My mother was very disappointed with my father  so, mother decided to split up , even though the father does not agree then we moved and took the mother to stay at grandmother’s home , until now we have never again met with  father and respective live. If I could go back in time maybe I would never allow my father to go wander far. And maybe this time the father was beside us.
Family is very important as it shapes our development and personality. The family protects your dignity and takes care of your well being. Family also gives us teachings that guide us through out our lives and this are the values we carry every where we go. In addition, your family comes to your aid during hard times.
Note:
ð Paragraph 1 is Orentation
ð Paragraph 2 is Complication
ð Paragraph 3 is Resolution
ð Paragraph 4 is coda / Moral message